He sits in stillness, somnolent, and stares
Into the setting sun’s declining rays,
Divested from the day’s disabling cares,
The breathless air an inner calm conveys;
Upon the gentle, rocking, rippling, waves,
Serene seagulls submit to Neptune’s charms,
Whose guile the hapless fisherman enslaves,
Or victims of outrageous storms embalms;
Thus be the course of floating ship of thought,
Unanchored, at behest of lilting breeze,
Effectuating consequences unsought,
To leave mere mortal man wonder with ease;
Convergence of the setting sun and sea,
Precipitates relaxing reverie.
Β©Meanderings 2016
Yes, I like this. Thoughts like an anchorless ship adrift on the sea of life…)
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Thanks. Yes. This line surprised me when it emerged. π
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I have often thought the best lines of any poem are those that creep in unawares…)
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Too true…. π
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Great lines Elliot.
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Thanks Peter! Have a good week. π
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oh! this is good, E! familiar thoughts sitting by a body of water, easy to relate. π
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Thanks P! Yes, the sea can have a seductive effect on us. π Hugs. β€οΈ
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indeed…as does gazing out into the sky, especially at night…I feel I really CAN see forever. π
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Most pleasant and creative past time. π Hugs!
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I think so too.
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This is just beautiful and so sensitive, I loved it, and the picture added harmony. So reflective. .xxx
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Thanks D! Pleased you like it. Hugs. π
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Beautiful images you portray in your writing. Love this sonnet.
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Thank you…. π
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Oh my this is your best sonnet yet. It speaks to our need to relax and dream
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Thanks, Mel. Too true…..What be this life if, full of care, we have no time to stand and stare? π Hugs! β€
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A life of endless toil and woe, spoiled when death tied it in a bow π you’re welcome
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Hugs. π
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Hi E. Beautiful Sunday sonnet. Hugs to you! β€
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Thanks Micki. Hugs. πππ
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Enchanting. π
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Thanks. β€οΈ
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This poem with accompanying image is truly beautiful….thank you, Bushka. Enjoy the day…janet. xx
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Thanks Janet. Hugs. ππ
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Lovely piece, Uncle! Apologies if I haven’t been regular, but I will be back! Hugs, as always π
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Thanks Kunal. No probs. I, too, am not too regular of late. So many other things to do. Hugs
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