When I opine upon your pristine face,
And ponder on the marvel of such grace,
The calm demeanour of persuasive smile,
Enjoin my hasty gestures to restyle;
Too easily your counsel is declined,
Committing us to suffer, much maligned,
Yet, constantly your presence at my side,
In gentle whispers, courage does confide;
Upon each thought and action kindly pour
The elixir of Father Time before
They, with determined missive, take the wing
And all but goodness to their purpose bring;
To you, fair Patience, do these words appeal,
Lest, for my indiscretions I must kneel!
© Meanderings 2016
Just beautiful, E!
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Thanks, D! Hugs. ❤️
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This is so beautiful. Powerfully written and great photo too. Happy Sunday.
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Thanks, A!
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Aww, that is just lovely, with my favourite Arum lily to match it…
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Thanks Vicky! Hugs. 💕
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Beautiful sonnet indeed! I love the call out to patience especially. We can all use more patience
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Thanks Mel…..Deliberately wrote it this way….indicating the ‘addressee’ at the end…;) Hugs!
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I know and I love it! It’s a poetic open letter calling for more patience and it’s a sonnet, which makes it more awesome!
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Great words Elliot. Lovely image.
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Thanks Peter! 😊
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What a lovely extended personification. It works so well!
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Thanks Gill! Hugs.
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Beautifully written, I did enjoy it.xxx
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I would name her Snow White. pure in heart. Mesmerising words.
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Thank You, Daisy. Lovely….. Hugs! ❤
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Very lovely indeed. Your sonnets are wonderful, and the photo of the Lily is perfect.
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Thanks, P! Much appreciated! Hugs! ❤
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I’m stuck on inserting photos again.
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Must be something small going awry! 😉Hugs.
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it is so frustrating! Sometimes it works and I am at a loss to know what I did that worked.
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You might have to ask on one of the ‘Forums’. 😉 Hugs!
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I asked the tekkies, but basically they just say that I’m doing something wrong. (blame the victim) 🙂 various bloggers tell me they just use the old editor with wpadmin.
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HUgs! ❤
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they don’t seem to understand my questions
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Hugs!
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I often suspect the tekkies aren’t really writers, and don’t worry too much about style and form….many of them that is, not all.
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Hugs! 💕
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