Hourglass #1

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Stillness rules the roost,
Daylight burgeons,
No leaf moves,
Children
Sleep!
Gulls
Chatter
On Rooftops,
Noise Discordant
Wakes whole Neighbourhood!

©Meanderings 2016

Note: My own innovation…..not sure what to call the format! Looks like an hourglass….hence what I call it…for now.

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25 responses to “Hourglass #1

  1. What an amazing image….and the words superb. Janet. xx

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  2. The stillness…the focus…and the hourglass….fabulous!

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  3. Great job! Let’s call it the B Hour. What say, sweet hugger? Hugs:)

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  4. It’s actually called shape verse and you did a splendid job!! Hugs! ❤

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  5. Great photo. Did you take that one yourself? Lovely words too.

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  6. Wakey,wakey its going to be a great day – down here in kiwiland too.

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  7. Love the innovation and the name!!! I never have been able to write in any format because rules just make it that much more difficult for me… But your ease with words is amazing!! Lots of love Bushka 🙂

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  8. I love the turn in the middle and how the poem works back out to where it started but with everything in reverse–like they are mirror images of each other. Very cool.

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  9. Oh, I did enjoy this, and that gorgeous gull!xxx

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