Gentle footfalls whisper down the aisle,
As darkness, still, shields souls at prayer,
First light rays through stained glass sneak,
A sign of rising sun,
Harbinger of Life,
For One and All,
Called to be,
Truly,
Man!
ยฉMeanderings 2016
Gentle footfalls whisper down the aisle,
As darkness, still, shields souls at prayer,
First light rays through stained glass sneak,
A sign of rising sun,
Harbinger of Life,
For One and All,
Called to be,
Truly,
Man!
ยฉMeanderings 2016
Love the alliteration – very effective, and the form perfectly echoes the thought.
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Thanks Gill! Pleased you picked up these elements….. Hugs!
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yes, I like your Nonet a lot… nice one!
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Thanks….Hugs! โค
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I can see it in my mind. Nicely done!
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Thanks….Takes some care in getting all together nicely…. ๐ Hugs!
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such finesse in your writing . love love love. SO few words say so much . I am the complete opposite ๐
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Thank You…So kind of you….In my nature to be minimalist…not always easy….Mind you, I can chatter too. ๐
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Good job, I tend to run a little off when trying to stay within a set parameter…:)
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Very good Elliot. you are becoming quite expert in this style.
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Thanks Peter. This one is not that easy to write…. ๐
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excellent nonet! The first couple lines a gorgeous! The finish is perfect too ๐
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Thanks Mel. Hugs!
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You’re welcome ๐
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Your writing is always so special. You paint lovely images with your words.
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Thanks….Well said; that’s how I see all that I seek to create…as a painting in progress…;)
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You work is exactly like that.
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Thanks… ๐
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I can’t get over this poem. The depth that in conveyed by you the writer is is simply astounding. This is a piece that I will lay in bed dreaming about tonight. Please continue to captivate us with your words. The dreams are so sweet a last they fall fast. To mesmerize is to reverberate the oh so sullen whispers of a past Autumn. I would love if you would follow my blog as well. Thank you for your piece.
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Thanks for popping in here…Very kind of you…will visit yours anon .
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Bushka congrats on being the first to comment, it would excellent if you could comment on all of my stories if you have the chance, I like what people like you have to say. Looking forward to what else you have to say about my other stories.
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Will keep in touch.
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Thanks….Will be taking a journey anon….
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