Tragic Loss!


When Death decides to launch his fateful dart,
Then Grief strikes deep into a mother’s heart –
A daughter sweet at fifty,
Adorable and lovely….
Such loss will rend the sternest soul apart!

©Meanderings 2016

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20 responses to “Tragic Loss!

  1. Bushka, this was quite a lovely rhyme, tragic loss notwithstanding. I hope that it wasn’t anything too personal and close to the heart? If yes, my condolences. If not, let’s hope that the fateful dart keeps missing its target.

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  2. A sad but lovely write. My prayers go tou to your friend and her family. God bless.

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  3. The very worst loss! I am sorry for you all!

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  4. Very beautiful and touching Bushka… You’re such a talent!!! Hugs

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  5. Ahhhh, how terribly tragic. beautifully

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  6. Very tragic, well written and beautiful image. No parent wants to outlive their child.

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  7. Needless to say this touched my heart. Little else is as sorrowful as outliving a child. My heart extends.

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