Pray!
Let Peace
Forever
Enter torn Lives,
Riven by Greed and Ruthless Power Lust!
Let Charity Engender Human Trust,
Till Each Survives,
Then Never
To Cease –
Stay!
© Meanderings 2016
Pray!
Let Peace
Forever
Enter torn Lives,
Riven by Greed and Ruthless Power Lust!
Let Charity Engender Human Trust,
Till Each Survives,
Then Never
To Cease –
Stay!
© Meanderings 2016
What a beautiful message. Let peace enter in everyone’s heart.
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Indeed….What a wonderful World….it would be…. 🙂
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not only a beautiful message…but also a wonderful form! 🙂
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Thanks. A bit more challenging…to get good balance. 🙂 Hugs!
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I agree, an aesthetic form adds charm to minimalist poetry I think…
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Indeed…though I suspect there are other factors as well. 🙂
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yeah, well it’s cool and looks nice, and also provides a crutch for reading with intended emphasis and parsody… if that’s the right word. Clever shapes are attractive and fun, no excuse for clumsy structure and wording.
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As you say….. 😉
Incidentally, I assume you mean to say ‘prosody’? Hugs! ❤
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prophecy? parody? parity? rhapsody? 🙂
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Happy sounding endings… 😉
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yep…happy is my usual state
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🙂
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I admit this word and its insinuations are mysterious to me…guess I’ll have to track down its etomology. I learned a bit of Latin back in ninth grade high school…one of the best things I ever learned… prodigal? prod? product? … I prefer words that explain themselves… 🙂
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Hugs!
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A great message.
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Thanks Peter. 🙂
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What a beautiful messgae and stunning lilli.xxx
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Thanks D! Hugs!
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Wonderful message👏💕👏
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Thanks. How do you like the format? 😉
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Also wonderful of course!👌
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Good! Hugs!
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Wonderful, lovely photo and I love the visual form of your words, it’s an art in itself..!
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Thanks! Yes, I believe ‘imagery’ is an integral part of poetry…. 😉
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