
Fallen…..
Beware
Ill will rebounds,
Pray, do not kismet dare,
Grave consequence good sense confounds,
Take Care!
© Meanderings 2016
P.S. Exploring the Cinquain Format! 😉
Fallen…..
Beware
Ill will rebounds,
Pray, do not kismet dare,
Grave consequence good sense confounds,
Take Care!
© Meanderings 2016
P.S. Exploring the Cinquain Format! 😉
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Thanks….. 😉
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A great pleasure to read your writings and I really like those photos you pst as well..:)
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Thanks….I enjoy your postings as well…:)
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Keep your ears and eyes open, and mind clear. Nice post and bloom Elliot.
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Thanks Peter…we can’t be too sure…. 😉
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You mastered this form for sure! Great way to live, too!
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Thanks…still working on it….More to follow. 😉
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Always a big thank you….love this. xxx
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Thanks Janet…..Take Care! Hugs! ❤
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Caution! I love it… so is this a Cinquain? Copy cat that I am maybe I will try one if I can figure out the rules.
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Yes….This is a Cinquain…. Just look it up…..Interesting…more challenging for me to add in rhyme…. 😉
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interesting form. I tried my hand at a it last night. I admire your rhyming cinquain…nice. I do like rhyming poetry, but am trying to learn to write effective metre.
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Thanks. Yes, I also like effective metre and rhyme…..Schooled in Prosody…..that probably ‘dates’ me. 😉
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show-off…what is Prosody? I wager I have an earlier ‘date’ than you do. 😉 I have two weak Cinquains, but upon readying one of them I “lost” a word, and my little tablet did its thing and POOF! …. gone into the cosmos. I had made an erasure in my pencil version, thus the lost word.
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Ha! Ha! Won’t go into dates… 🙄 I’m sure you can get much online… 😉
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indeed…I might like something less academic. The wiki I saw is at an advanced level poetry session. 🙂
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I’m sure you’ll find some less academic….I often look for the more simple… 😉 Hugs!
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well! I missed that seminar! I read a long wikipedia post…no examples to speak of. I wonder–would regional accents and slang fit in? They may have mentioned that before my eyes glazed over… 🙂 I need some good primers on poetry…the computer screen just doesn’t cut it for me.
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I’m sure you can get some good guidance ‘online’…. Wiki has an excellent piece on Prosody…. See here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prosody_%28linguistics%29 Hugs!
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I know..I ran headlong into it this morning. I pocketed it, and read the whole thing, will study it again.
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Take it in small portions. 😉 ❤
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Ah yes…Karma! what goes around, comes around.xxx
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May be…Though it seems not always to work that way…. 😉
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too late now…I am into it now. I did find a more bite-size site…which I am printing out on paper. I know, I’m an old luddite…but I work better on paper when trying to digest information.
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Oddly enough, I do the same more often than not… 😉
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I think I already had the general idea, just didn’t know what it was called. I guess elipses and dashes and the like figures in too.
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Linguistics was my first choice when I transferred to the university, but i moved into History instead.
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Our choice of subjects are much akin…certainly at the outset. 😉
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yes…… interesting. I am about to post my first Cinquain that I wish to let see the light of day.
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Good…..Looking forward to it. It will be good, I’m sure. 😉 Hugs!
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